SoM Peer review

Student in review - Jake http://jakinator89.blogspot.com/2016/04/student-of-month-story.html

50 - 50: body paragraphs

25 - 25: quotes

25 - 25: inverted pyramid

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Opinions writing preview activity 

The Starlight Theatre Company jumps into Spring with a plethora of shows

1 - By Victoria Newell

2 - The story is about how the starlight theatre goes through the U.I.L. process of making a 40 minute, 15 person maximum, to create a play.

3 - No

4 - Yes

5 - No opinion

6 - Yes

7 - 3rd person

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Band Director set to move move to a new school at year's end

1 - By Lauren Blevins

2 - Kim Shuttlesworth, a band director moves to a new high school in the outskirts of North Austin. Students talk about her lasting memories and how she help students.

3 - "With the great accomplishments of the band, hard work and dedications must come as well."

4 - No

5 - No

6 - Yes

7 - 3rd person


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Apple refuses to violate privacy of user

1 - By ?

2 - After the San Bernardino attacks, the cell phone from one of the shooters was locked and the FBI wanted Apple to unlocked, Apple strongly denied the offer. Even after the FBI went to court, the FBI said they hired hacker to unlock the phone, making a loss of security from the agentsy.

3 - "A teenager's life line is their cellphone. From Twitter, to conversations with friends, a teenager cannot live without their phone. It is also one of the most secure items they own."

4 - Yes

5 - Yes because the would say that "once the program is created, no one will is safe from encryption".

6 - No

7 -  2nd person
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Drug dog investigations have students feeling as though their rights are being violated at school

1 - Granger Coats

2 - High Schooler is when most drugs addictions happen, so drug sniffing dogs are used to find if anyone has any drugs.

3 - "So why does a place of education, whose goal it is to better prepare students for the world and pre mote the ideal of democracy take away students constitutional right?"

4 - Yes

5 - No

6 - No

7 - 2nd person

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Social media, back at it again

1 - Alicia Molina

2 - The story of "Damn Daniel" and his Van. (ugh)

3 -

4 - Yes

5 -

6 - Yes

7 - 3rd person

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1 - The main differences are: What you believe in over news, opinions could have no value and if you want your opinion to have value, then get in to politics, and last,no one wants to read a news paper about your opinion because that not what some one wants to read.

2 - To discuss more about the story.

3 - Bulling, video games, and weather.